Selasa, 26 April 2016

Selasa, 19 April 2016

Task 8 : Invitation Letter

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This time, I'm going to write an invitation letter.

Monster Inc.
67 Queens Lane

South Brunswick, VA 23868

Dear Ms Nuorela,
Our database shows that you have been one of our best customers. We would like to thank you for your business by inviting you to Monster Inc.’s 3rd anniversary this Sunday.
Our company’s 3rd anniversary will be held on Sunday in Grand Seal Hotel. We open the gate at 09.00 am. Free foods and drinks will be available. This event is invitation only.
We are looking forward to seeing you at the hotel.
Sincerely,


Matthew
Craig Matthew

Well, that is my letter. I am looking for your comment and review.

Selasa, 12 April 2016

Task 7 : Letter of Opinion

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there's much more for us to seea brand new day for you and meand with confidence i say, " we're better than ever." and i don't know where this will lead but in my life you need to be 'cause i need to say, "hello again"
Enough with that song. haha. By the way, that is my favorite song from Hoobastank. Just like that song, I wanna say "Hello again!" In this part, I will make a letter of opinion from a news. This is the news,
A Syrian journalist who was shot in the Turkish city of Gaziantep in an attack claimed by the Islamic State group died from his wounds Tuesday, a close friend said.
The death of Halab Today TV presenter Mohammed Zahir al-Sherqat marks the fourth assassination of a Syrian journalist in Turkey claimed by the extremist group.
Sherqat, who was shot in the neck from close range on Sunday while walking on a street, died in a hospital in Gaziantep near the Syrian border, according to his friend Barry Abdulattif, a Syrian activist.
Friends told the AP that the journalist had received death threats as recently as two months ago from IS extremists.
IS claimed the attack on Monday via the IS-affiliated Aamaq news agency, which said Sherqat "used to present anti-Islamic State programs."
The journalist came to Turkey in 2015 after surviving an assassination attempt in Syria and started to work with Halab Today. His programs took a stance against extremist groups.
Sherqat, a native of the Syrian town of Al-Bab, was an imam who studied Islamic Law at Damascus University, Abdulattif said. When the Syrian revolution started in 2011, he was a founding member of the local coordinating committee of Al-Bab and a field organizer of demonstrations against the Syrian regime. He later formed the Abu Bakr Al-Sadiq Brigade which fought under the banner of the opposition Free Syrian Army.
When extremist groups Al-Nusra and IS appeared in Al-Bab, Sherqat opposed them, according to Abdulattif, who is also a native of the town.
The killing of Sherqat follows the assassinations last year of two Syrian journalists who were found with their throats slit in the southeastern city of Sanliurfa and a third journalist who was shot dead in the street in Gaziantep. The attacks have prompted media advocacy group Reporters Without Borders to urge Turkish authorities to protect exiled Syrian journalists in the country.
"The situation is very bad, we don't feel safe," Abulattif said. "We know there are a lot of sleeper (IS) cells in Turkey and elsewhere but it is not easy to catch them."
Another friend and activist from Al-Bab living in Gaziantep, Marwan Shawy, shared that concern. He said Turkey's latest policies toward Syrians — including restrictions on their movements between cities and tightened border controls — are doing little to improve safety.
"Whatever they are doing so far is not working," Shawy said. "The last two (IS-related) incidents were shots in broad daylight and no one was caught."
Many Syrian activists based in Gaziantep or other cities near the border report receiving threats from IS, yet most do not have a financially viable or legal way out of Turkey. Complicating matters, a controversial deal between Europe and Turkey, home to 2.7 million Syrians, recently came into effect with the aim of curbing the flow of migrants to Europe.
Turkish authorities haven't commented on the murder of Sherqat. (bbn)
Taken from : http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2016/04/13/syrian-journalist-attacked-by-is-in-turkey-dies-.html
Then, Here is my letter of opinion : 
Sir/Madam,
     I was so disgusted to hear a killing of one of the journalists, Zahir Al-Sherqat in Turkey by an IS activist. I just think “What was he thinking about? Why did he kill such an innocent person?” I do not understand their thoughts. With an alibi that Mr Sherqat was an anti-Islamic states activist, they killed him.
     In this case, I can say that Mr Sherqat did not do anything wrong, but the IS did. Why did they do an assasination in Syria? Did Syria do something wrong? I do not think so. By doing that killing, the IS should be international criminals. I always hope that the IS can be destroyed. They sasid that they are Islam, but they always kill innocent people in many countries. Can they be said Islam?
     I wish that the international army alliance could catch and destroy them.
                                                            Cakra
                                                         Cakra
                                                       Yogyakarta

Well, I know that my writing is not perfect. So, I'm waiting for your review. See you again in the next post. ;)

Selasa, 05 April 2016

Task 6: Responding Complaint Letter (With Revision)

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Aweyeah! Weekly task again! You meet me again, buddy. In this task my lecturer told me to respond a complaint letter.

In this task, I will respond one of my friends' complaint letter. It is a letter from Peter. If you don't mind, please visit his blog too, petereka25.blogpsot.co.id.

Let's get down to the business.

13 Balerante St.
Merdikorejo
28/3/2016

The Head of Council,
Alvarez Council,
Blungon St,
Spriggan

Dear Sir/Madam,
                 I am writing to complain about the plan of chopping all the trees in my neighborhood that announced recently.
                In my opinion, the plan of chopping down the trees will affect both the geographical and atmospheric nature of the city.  Trees play a vital part in taking in the pollution of the atmosphere and convert it into oxygen as well as trees keep the soil on the ground intact. Due to the absence of trees in many localities the atmosphere contains dust particles which cause breathing problems, lung diseases and allergies such as bronchitis etc.
                Besides, the trees here make us feel comfort because they reduce the heat of the sun to touch our neighborhood. We as a good citizen always clean the leaves, branches in our street on our street.
                I on behalf of Merdikorejo neighborhood say “No” to the plan of chopping down all the trees. We have another thing in our mind. It is better to chop the old trees that almost fall down and replace them with the new one. Moreover, together we could plant more trees and make the city's atmosphere clean and healthy.
                I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours Sincerely,
Peter E.S.
Peter Eka Sanjaya

That is the letter, and here is my respond.

Alvarez Council,
Blungon St,
Spriggan
Peter Eka Sanjaya
13 Balerante St.
Merdikorejo
28/3/2016

Dear Mr Sanjaya,

            I have received the letter you sent to me. I am writing in order to respond it. Firstly, I am that that I can not cancel the council’s plan to chop down the trees. It has been the council’s decision, and been signed by the president.

            Secondly, our plan is not a plan without considering the environment. In or opinion, there are still many trees around your resident, they are on the south and east areas. So, if we chop down the one near your resident, it will not affect that much.

            Finally, we are planning to build a children’s play ground on the place where the trees re going to be chopped down. That is because, we think that your resident has many kids. However, they do not have much place to play. It also prevents the kids from being introvert.

            I think that is all from me. If you have any problems, you may contact us again, and we will try our best to help you. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Ahned
Ahmed Vicente


Well, that's all for this week. Don't forget to give your evaluation down there. 

See you, and may the force be with you. Hahaha. Just kidding, may the God be with you. ;)


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Alvarez Council,
Blungon St,
Spriggan
Peter Eka Sanjaya
13 Balerante St.
Merdikorejo
28/3/2016

Dear Mr Sanjaya,

            I have received the letter you sent to me. I am writing in order to respond it. Firstly, I am sorry that I can not cancel the council’s plan to chop down the trees. It has been the council’s decision, and been signed by the president.

            Secondly, our plan is not a plan without considering the environment. In or opinion, there are still many trees around your resident, they are on the south and east areas. So, if we chop down the one near your resident, it will not affect that much.

            Finally, we are planning to build a children’s play ground on the place where the trees re going to be chopped down. That is because, we think that your resident has many kids. However, they do not have much place to play. It also prevents the kids from being introvert.

            I think that is all from me. If you have any problems, you may contact us again, and we will try our best to help you. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Ahned
Ahmed Vicente
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