Selasa, 29 Maret 2016

Task 5: The Complaint Letter (With Revision)

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Hi, guys! Meet me again in the weekly task. This week is about a complaint letter. The situation is that the council where you live is going to build a new supermarket near my residence. Later on, you disagree with the plan for several reasons. Then, I write a complaint letter.

OK! Let's check it out.

                                                                                                                           4004 Bruce St.
                                                                                                                           Saint Louis, MO 63146
March 30
The Council of St. Louis,
Municipal Building,
Saint Louis

Dear Sir/Madam,
            I am writing in order to complaint about your plan to build a new supermarket near my residence.
            Respectfully, I do not agree with that plan for several reasons. Firstly, it the residence where I live is a crowded residence. Then, if you build a new supermarket, I think that it will be much more crowded.
            Secondly, by building that supermarket, it means that you have to chop down the trees around there. It may cause the temperature increases.
            Finally, my residence has a narrow street. If you build that supermarket, then there will be more vehicles passing the street. It may cause a big traffic jam.
            I am looking forward to hearing from you at your latest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Charles

M. Charles Sanders

Well, that is my complaint letter. I am writing for your comments and evaluations. ;)
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                                                                                                                           4004 Bruce St.
                                                                                                                           Saint Louis, MO 63146
March 30
The Council of St. Louis,
Municipal Building,
Saint Louis

Dear Sir/Madam,
            I am writing in order to complaint about your plan to build a new supermarket near my residence.
            Respectfully, I do not agree with that plan for several reasons. Firstly, it s the residence where I live is a crowded residence. Then, if you build a new supermarket, I think that it will be much more crowded.
            Secondly, by building that supermarket, it means that you have to chop down the trees around there. It may cause the temperature increases.
            Finally, my residence has a narrow street. If you build that supermarket, then there will be more vehicles passing the street. It may cause a big traffic jam.
            I am looking forward to hearing from you at your latest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Charles

M. Charles Sanders

3 komentar:

  1. Unknown29 Maret 2016 pukul 19.51

    Hello buddy,
    For your post about complaint letter I would like to give a little correction (maybe).
    In the sentence "Firstly, it the residence where I live is a crowded residence."
    "it the residence" I think you should give "is"
    But I do not really sure,so CMIIW :))

    Overall I like your post. Always be happy OK?

    BalasHapus
  2. Unknown29 Maret 2016 pukul 19.53

    I think you forgot to put is in this sentence
    'Firstly, it the residence...'
    It should be => Firstly, it is the residence...

    BalasHapus
  3. Biworo'sBlog29 Maret 2016 pukul 20.23

    Hi brother

    Good posting, it's look be better if you rearrange your layout.
    Thank's, keep blooging

    BalasHapus

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